Tuesday, June 15, 2010


My name thing "WannabeAuthor" is total truth.
I write all the freakin time! And when I'm not writing, I'm trying to think of new ideas. I write down millions of stories that I never finish, but right now I'm working on a story I like to call "HEIRESS". It's kind of like a Harry Potter thing, but not completely. So, since I have nothing interesting to vlog, I might as well put up the first chapter! Or at least part of it.

Tell me what you think of it!

So here we go! :)

September 2048

Elizabeth hugged her mom for the last time, even though she didn’t realize it. If she had, she wouldn’t have done it so carelessly. Her mom took her face in her fragile, shaking hands.

“Now, Lizzy bear,”


“Okay! Okay! Are you sure you want to do this?”

“Yes, I’m completely sure! The money is taken care of and I won’t have to suffer through…” her mother’s face was filled with sadness. “Mom, I love home. But that school is not for me. It’s a good thing I’m going, trust me.”

“Boarding passengers in sections five through nine!” the woman repeated a few times. Liz looked at her ticket.

“Okay, I gotta go, mom. Love ya. Call you later.” And she quickly got on the plane.

Liz was about to turn her phone off when she sat down, when she saw a video message from her mom. She pressed the screen to see her mom’s face filled with worry,

“I’m so sorry I didn’t tell u this…

… Ur adopted.”

Liz was so shocked. So incredibly shocked. How could her own mother do this to her? But she wasn’t her mother. She didn’t know who her mother was. Her eyes began watering.

“Excuse me, miss, but you’ll have to turn off your phone.” Elizabeth looked at the flight attendant with anger.It was an icy cold look that she had mastered when she was little. “Oh, I’ll leave you be…” and the flight attendant left, looking dazed.

It would only take a few hours to get from Mississippi to London, England, where Liz’s new school would be. She had gotten a sudden scholarship out of nowhere, and of course she’d take it over a lousy public high school in a small town. Now she had all the more reason to go. She couldn’t call that town home anymore. Liz cried the whole way there.

I thought of this because one of my best friends from America and she's always saying she thinks she's adopted! LOL. Please leave a review! :)


  1. hey Ellie guess who it is?? The ONLY ONE from ur own town!

  2. Is good but Rose already knew that!

  3. I think this has potential as a pre-teen and teen novel, except the spacing was off, but I'm sure you just didn't check it because it's in a blog. Good luck :) !